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13．随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对字迹的重视程度降低了．据一项调查显示，有85.8%的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别．
请根据图的百分比信息写一篇120词左右的英文短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法．开头段已给出．

Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．
Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying lessand less attention to handwriting．
According to a recent survey，about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting ispoor．Yet for various reasons，many students don't want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of thestudents think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9percent think that practising handwriting is useless．
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇看图作文，认真读图，从图画中看出反映的问题，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．百分之51.5的学生认为他们只能使用电脑，所以没有必要浪费时间提高他们的书写能力．句中that they can just use a computer是宾语从句；so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting，是由连词so引导的结构状语从句．
亮点句型二：32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise．百分之32.3的人认为他们忙于学习，以至于没有时间练习．本句是一个含有宾语从句的句子，在宾语从句that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise中，运用了固定句型so+形容词/副词+that的句型．"如此…以致于…"．

解答 Nowadays，with the growing popularity of computers，teachers，students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting．【现象】
     According to a recent survey，about 85.5 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor．Yet for various reasons，many students don't want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer，so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting．（亮点句型一）32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise．（亮点句型二）10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless．【不想改变的理由】
As the saying goes，writing style shows the man．Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial，especially for middle school students．Therefore，in my opinion，more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future．【个人观点】

点评 看图作文是以图画或图表来提供目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等场景，要求作者借助图画，通过联想将一组画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式，用于反映图中所表现的思想内容，从写作体裁上看，可说明介绍，可叙事记人，可写景状物，也可以发表议论．看图作文主要考查学生的观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造能力和语言表达能力．