Question

【题目】假如你是李华，为加强旧书的循环利用，最近你校学生会准备建立面向学生的“图书库”，请根据下面的提示写一篇倡议书，面向高三同学征集旧书。

1. 活动的目的与意义；

2. 号召高三学生参与。

注意：1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:图书库: book bank

Boys and girls,

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls,

To make better use of the books we have used but no longer need, we’ve planned to set up a book bank. By collecting books and magazines that are in good condition and are of use to those in need, we can recycle them in an effective way, thus avoiding unnecessary waste. Meanwhile, the notes in the books from the book bank can help us learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s equally important is that, by using the recycled books, we can save a lot of money that can be used for other aspects of our school life.

Therefore, it’s vital that we depend on you, Senior Three schoolmates, to make generous donations of your used books and other learning materials, which will definitely serve as shining examples for the students in lower grades.

The Student Union

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议书。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇倡议书：为加强旧书的循环利用，最近你校学生会准备建立面向学生的“图书库”，请根据下面的提示写一篇倡议书，面向高三同学征集旧书。活动的目的与意义；号召高三学生参与。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：book bank（书库）；By collecting books and magazines（收集书和杂志）；in an effective way（用一种有效的方法）；the recycled books（再回收的书）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封倡议书。重点突出，要点齐全，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。To make better use of the books we have used but no longer need, we’ve planned to set up a book bank.动词不定式做目的状语；By collecting books and magazines that are in good condition and are of use to those in need,句中使用that引导的定语从句；thus avoiding unnecessary waste.现在分词做自然的结果状语；What’s equally important is that, by using the recycled books, we can save a lot of money that can be used for other aspects of our school life.句中what引导的主语从句堪称经典；另外，By collecting，in need, more efficiently，Therefore,等的使用也为文章增色添彩。