Question

请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in what we hope to accomplish.

注意：????????????? ①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为不少于120字，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

“Actions speak louder than words.” The message in this saying is conveyed very clearly: taking action is more meaningful than just shouting empty slogans. Only if we match our words with actions can we achieve our dream.

When it comes to taking action, Nelson Mandela’s example can’t escape me. Even when he was a young man, he dreamed of making black people and white people equal. Rather than just paying lip service, he went through many struggles to put his ideas into practice. To make his dream come true, he himself was in prison for almost thirty years. Not only has he inspired many to follow him despite many difficulties, but he has become an international symbol for fairness and justice.

Nelson Mandela sets a good example to us all, which makes it self-evident that we must take immediate action to make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中提到一些常见的短语When it comes to当提到..；dreamed of梦想着； Rather than 而不是；put his ideas into practice 把想法付诸实施；sets a good example to 举例；take immediate action to do 采取措施做某事。Only if we match our words with actions can we achieve our dream这个句子中用了倒装句，only+状语+部分倒装。To make his dream come true, he himself was in prison for almost thirty years.这个句子中to make表目的可放在句首也可放在句后。Not only has he inspired many to follow him despite many difficulties, but he has become an international symbol for fairness and justice.这个句子中not only …but also….连接两个句子时，第一个句子部分倒装。

考点： 提纲类作文