题目内容
【题目】从2016年底以来,共享单车突然就在国内火爆起来。重庆的街头巷尾也随处可见小黄车的身影,确为大家带来了许多便利。可存取不限的共享单车也可谓命运多舛:被恶意破坏,刷漆据为己有,关进自家走廊不让别人用等不良现象也屡屡被媒体曝光。学生作为共享单车主要的使用群体之一,请分享你对此现象的看法。
内容提示:1. 共享单车的现状和问题
2. 你对这些问题的看法
3. 你的建议
注意:(1)词数100字左右;
(2)符合语言规范,行文连贯。
备用词汇:shared bicycle 共享单车
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【答案】In recent years, with the mushroom improvement of our living condition, a new vehicle which is called shared bicycles has been brought out. However, some of them are reported to have been broken on purpose or have been locked by individuals to take possession of them.
This is a very serious problem, like a mirror reflecting human nature. The original intention of shared bicycles is to provide convenient traffic and maintain a low-carbon lifestyle, but some people are centered for themselves and don’t relate to others.
As far as I’m concerned, it’s our obligation to protect public property. Nevertheless, what people do mainly depends on what they acquire from education. In other words, education determines people’s behavior. To sum up, we should appeal to the mass to raise public awareness; in the meanwhile, as high school students, we should learn to cherish and protect public properties.
【解析】这是一片开放性作文。文章只给出了背景以及简单的提示。考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全。注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意词数:100词左右。
【范文亮点】
In recent years, with the mushroom improvement of our living condition, a new vehicle which is called shared bicycles has been brought out.定语从句。
This is a very serious problem, like a mirror reflecting human nature.这是一个非常严重的问题,如反映人性的一面镜子。
高级词汇以及短语的使用:As far as I’m concerned, 就我而言;Nevertheless然而;To sum up总而言之;in the meanwhile与此同时。
what people do mainly depends on what they acquire from education.主语从句。