题目内容
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分.
High school students sometimes feel stressed because frequent exams.Here is some suggestions on how to deal with the problem.
First of all,you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams.It's important to make a good study plan and carry them out.To stay healthy and energetic,you'd better to do some sports after school,such as playing basketball,swimming and so on.Besides,a balancing diet is helpful.You should eat more vegetables but avoid food with too much fat.In addition,it's a good idea to turn to your parents and teachers with help when you got into trouble.They will sure help you out.
分析 这是缓解高中生压力的几条建议.
首先要有自信,坚持自己的梦想;课后做运动;平衡的饮食对身体有益,多吃蔬菜少吃脂肪,此外,有问题向老师和家长求助.
解答 High school students sometimes feel stressed because∧frequent exams.Here is some suggestions on how to deal with the problem.
First of all,you should have confidences and hold on to your dreams.It's important to make a good study plan and carry them out.To stay healthy and energetic,you'd better to do some sports after school,such as playing basketball,swimming and so on.Besides,a balancing diet is helpful.You should eat more vegetables but avoid food with too much fat.In addition,it's a good idea to turn to your parents and teachers with help when you got into trouble.They will sure help you out.
解析:
1:because 后加of.考查介词. because+句子,而because of+短语,所以改为because of修饰frequent exams.
2:is 改为are.考查主谓一致关系.Here is some suggestions 是一个倒装句s,ome suggestions 是主语,所以Here is 改为Here are.
3:confidences改为confidence.考查名词. confidence 表示"勇气",是不可数. 所以去掉s.
4:them改为it.考查代词一致. 代指前面的a good study plan,所以用it.
5:去掉to.考查固定句式. had better 为情态动词,后跟原形.
6:balancing改为balanced.考查形容词.固定短语A balanced diet 表示"平衡的饮食".
7:but 改为and.考查连词. You should eat more vegetables but avoid food with too much fat.翻译为"你应该吃更多的蔬菜,还要避免吃太多的脂肪",前后是并列关系,所以用and.
8:with 改为for.考查介词."turn to sb for sth"是固定句式,表示"向某人求助某事".
9:got 改为get. 讲述的是现在的情况,前后用一般现在时态,因此 when you got into trouble 所以got改为get.
10:sure 改为surely.考查形容词和副词.修饰动词help 用副词surely.
点评 考查短文改错.
完全倒装句.
1)完全倒装即把整个谓语放到主语之前(是整个谓语动词,而非助动词).
例如:In came the teacher and the class began.(老师走了进来,然后开始上课.)
2)there引出的完全倒装句:除了最常见的there be句型以外,there还可以接appear,exist,lie,remain,seem to be,stand等,一般都译成"有"的含义,构成完全倒装句.
例如:There appeared to be a man in black in the distance.(远处有个穿黑色衣服的人.)
3)由地点和时间副词引出的完全倒装句:以地点副词here,there和时间副词now,then 开头,后面的动词是be,come,exist,fall,follow,go,lie,remain,seem,stand等,而主语又是名词时,构成完全倒装句.
例:Under that tree sits a beautiful girl.(那棵树下坐着一位美丽的姑娘.)