Question

假设你是某市一中的学生李明，现在你向市长写一封信，反映学校周边的交通安全问题。要点如下：

1.学校靠近几条主要街道，很多学生和老师得横过街道才能进入学校大门；

2.在交通高峰时期，车辆很多，学生过街上学不得不在车流中穿行；

3.有的家长为确保学生上学安全，每天开车送孩子,这使交通更加拥挤不堪；

4.建议政府采取措施（可适当发挥），以免发生事故。

①词数：100个左右

②参考词汇：交通高峰时期rush hour，穿行thread one’s way.

③开头已写好，不计入词数

Dear Mayor,

I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mayor,                                                     

I am a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something important to tell you. Our school stands near some main streets, and many students as well as teachers have to cross the streets before they enter the school gate. In rush hours there are so many cars, buses and trucks going back and forth that we have to thread our way through the moving cars and buses. In order to make sure that their children are safe, some parents send their children to school with motorcycles or even private cars every day, which makes the busy streets more crowded.

I think the government should do something to improve the situation. Maybe an overpass can be built over the road to prevent the traffic accidents from happening. In addition，citizens should be encouraged to turn to public transportation like buses, BRT, which will ease traffic jams. It would be appreciated if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文。本文的要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难点在于运用合适的词汇和句型把要点的意思表达出来，可以使用多样化的句式，如倒装句，省略句等，让文章更有层次。在写作的时候要使用合适的连接词如what’s more，on the other hand等，让文章更流畅。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键是把要点都要表达出来，不要有遗漏，在写作的时候要使用合适的高级的句型，和高级的词汇提高文章的层次，也要使用连接词来连接全文。