Question

假定你是李华。请你给美国的朋友Tom写封信，告诉他你将去他所在的城市度假，带去他想要的那幅中国丝绸，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需要说明：

航班号：CA991

到达：8月16日上午11:30

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

  How are you doing?

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

Looking forward to your reply.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Peter，

How are you going ?

I’m writing to tell you that I’m going to your city for a holiday, and I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet me at the airport and take me to my hotel since this is the first time that I have visited America .

My flight number is CA991 and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August16, thank you in advance.

【解析】

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，写的是作者要去朋友的城市度假，因为第一次去所以需要朋友接机。

写信是中学生最熟悉的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们有话可说。写作时应注意下面几点：

(1)注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给笔友Tom写信。

(2)注意时态的正确使用：用一般将来时和一般现在时。

(3)要点全面、层次清楚、语言简练。

(4)注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点间逻辑连贯、行文通顺。

(5)适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如The Would you please meet me at the airport（would you please +do sth ?请你….好吗?）, this is the first time that I have visited America .(this is the first time +主语 +have done，这是。。。第一次做某事) I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.（定语从句），in advance 提前，并且主语了句子的衔接如： also 等。

考点：提纲作文写作。