Question

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社会的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：
优点：1. 话题广泛；2 图片丰富；3 有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published
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Answer 1

Dear Editor,
As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published
by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us, Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into other ones.
Best regards,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：本文是一篇半开放性的作文，是关于现行教材的看法的。主要的要点已经给出了，细节方面需要考生做适当的补充。在写作的时候，要注意使用合适的连接词，让文章更有条理更流畅。同时也要使用高级的词汇和高级的句型，让文章更有档次，更有层次。
考点：考查半开放性作文的写作
点评：半开放性作文的难度较大，要求考生自己根据文章内容梳理要点，然后在整理成文，在写作时要合理运用连接词和高级词汇高级句型，让文章更有层次。