Question

【题目】学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。
内容：1.说明设计理由； 2.介绍新功能。
注意：1.词数不少于120个字； 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

【答案】 My Magic Pen Pens are necessities for every student, so we are all familiar with them. I designed my pen. On the one hand, it's easy to carry. On the other hand, it's used not only for writing but also for other important aspects. Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I can use it for a flasher. I won't be afraid of darkness any more.Secondly, I fix a tiny clockin the pen, I can know the time and I don't have to wear my watch. At last, I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen. I can either use it for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger. Such is the pen which I designed. Isn't it usefuland attractive?
【解析】本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够从日常生活中的熟悉的物品适当发挥想象。本书面表达的要求写一篇说明文，所给的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品设计理由；介绍此物品新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。