题目内容
“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高二尤为重要。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,在英语课上与同学们作交流。
1.目标的重要性;
2.如何设立目标;
3.谈谈你的近期目标;
4.如何实现你的目标。
注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Wish you to realize your dreams.
That's all.Thank you!
Dear classmates,
It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for.With a clear direction you will directly get what you want.
In my view,goals are not difficult to set. First,you should make clear what you really want. What's more,it's essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step. My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this,not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared,but also I will keep a positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.
Wish__you__to__realize__your__dreams.
That's__all.Thank__you!
【解析】
试题分析:
从文章体裁分析,本文是一篇记叙文的写作,主要让学生以“目标在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高二尤为重要”为主题展开叙述,内容应从包括以下四个方面来:一 :目标的重要性。二:如何设立目标。三:谈谈你的近期目标。四:如何实现你的目标。
写提纲作文时,一定要切题,抓住中心,紧扣要点。不要任意发挥,画蛇添足,也不要丢三落四,要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析,获取与写作内容有关的主要信息,并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来,找出最密切相关的要点,列出写作提纲。
亮点说明:文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如head for 朝…走,you will straightly get what you want你将直接得到你想要的东西(what引导的名词性从句),My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.(so that 引导的目的状语从句)not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.(not only…but also 引导的并列句,且位于句首构成了倒装句,并且主语了句子的衔接如:What’s more,In my view等。
考点:提纲作文。