Question

假设你是李雷，想寻找一位练羽毛球的球友，请你用英文在校内网站上写一个广告。

内容要点如下：

◇ 简介自己，特别是打球的水平（如球龄、成绩等）；

◇对球友的要求（与自己水平相当；周末有空闲等）；

◇给出联系方式（电话56221342；邮箱：luckylilei@hotmail.com）。

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；

2. 标题已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可以适当增加细节以使内容充实、行文连贯。

参考词汇：羽毛球 badminton

A Badminton Partner Wanted

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Answer 1

One possible version：

I’m looking for a badminton partner who can play with me on a regular basis.

My name is Li Lei, a sixteen-year-old boy who is crazy about the charming sport and has played badminton for about 4 years. I have taken part in several badminton games held by our city government and won the championship twice. Now I want to find a suitable partner who has the same level as me to play badminton together. Anybody who is good at playing badminton and has enough time on weekends can get in touch with me through the following ways.

Please dial my telephone number 56221342 or mail me at luckylilei@hotmail.com. Then we can discuss some details such as when and where we are going to play badminton together.

I am looking forward to your contact.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇短文要求写一份广告，属于实用文写作范畴。根据提示可以得到以下要点：自我介绍；对球友的要求；联系方式。从要点分析短文可以使用三个段落来进行布局，首先提出自己做广告的目的，然后介绍自己和自己的要求，最后写明自己的联系方式以及表达自己的殷切盼望之情。在语言方面，应该礼貌诚恳，自然流畅。在时态方面，文章应使用一般现在时，而且还要适当发挥想象，通过增加连接词来有效达到层次清晰，内容连贯的目的。此外，写作时还应注意用多种句式和结构以增加文章的亮点。参考词汇：羽毛球 badminton。

【亮点说明】本篇文章要点全面，层次清晰，内容充实、行文连贯，而且最大亮点就是长句的使用，这充分展示了作者驾驭句式的能力。在结构布局方面，作者开门见山提出广告的目的，然后用一句含有同位语和定语从句的长句My name is Li Lei, a sixteen-year-old boy who is crazy about the charming sport and has played badminton for about 4 years.对自己进行了简单介绍，接着在下文又连续使用了几个定语从句，比如Anybody who is good at playing badminton and has enough time on weekends can get in touch with me through the following ways.等表达了文章的所有要点，很好的完成了写作任务。

考点：考查提纲作文。