Question

假设你是李华，你上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr Li反映：

1．新书太少；

2．书架上的书比较混乱；

3．阅览室的一盏灯坏了；

4．管理员工作时彼此闲聊。

注意：

1．词数100~120左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Li,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library._______________________________

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So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.

Yours, 

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Mr. Li,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. Over the time 1 was there, I found something unpleasant. Therefore, I' d like to voice my opinions, which, I hope, would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers.

First, there are few new books on the shelves, and most books are not popular today. Second, some books are not sorted in proper order, making it difficult for readers to find what they want quickly. Third, the assistants didn't offer good service. Instead, they were chatting. In addition, they took no notice of the fact that a light wasn't working. Leave this state of affairs to stay the same, and I am afraid there will be fewer and fewer readers.

So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.

Yours, 

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇以写信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

考点：考查综合能力

点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。