题目内容
9.今年,你将高三毕业.为使即将升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更顺利,学校的《英语学习天地》请你给他们留言,提出一些中肯的建议.请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文.1.合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间;
2.搞好老师和同学之间的关系;
3.积极参加社团活动.
注意:1.词数:不少于100词;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 本文是一篇提纲式命题作文,要求给学校的《英语学习园地》请你给他们留言,提出一些中肯的建议.命题中给出了三个写作要点,因此考生需要仔细审题,把握主题,写作中要包含所有提示要点,根据要点进行适当的合理的发挥和想象.文章要注意遣词造句,注重句式变化,调动自己多年以来的英语积累和语言储备,写出富于变化,有利于高中生活的短文.结合所给材料,可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述,人称以第二人称为主.由于是提供建议,写作中注意使用连词,或者序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
解答 Here are some suggestions for you,which may help you enjoy your school life better.
As senior high school students.You will be living a very busy life.So first of all,you should arrange your time properly.You'd better make a timetable so that you know when to study,exercise and rest.Only in this way can you make good use of every minute.Besides,while in school,it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates.When you have a problem that you can't work it out alone,you'd better turn to your teachers or classmates for help.Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary.Last but not least,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves.
I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life.I'm sure that a beautiful future is waiting you.
点评 文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如living a very busy life,take an active part in;短语Only in this way can you make good use of every minute的倒装句及when引导的时间从句等等.并注意了句子的衔接如:So first of all,Besides,Last but not least等等.
A. | That | B. | Who | C. | Whether | D. | What |
A. | ordered | B. | are ordering | C. | will order | D. | had ordered |
A. | what should I choose | B. | what I should choose | ||
C. | which should I choose | D. | which I should choose |
A. | That | B. | What | C. | Which | D. | How |