第四部分写作第一节短文改错下面短文中共有10处错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2．只允许修改10处.多者不计分, 3. 改错在原文上� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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第四部分写作(共两节, 满分35 分)

第一节短文改错

下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分； 3. 改错在原文上改

Dear David,

Having been seen the notice on the Internet, I know you want to make friends in our country so as to learning Chinese and Chinese culture as well. I’m very glad to be your friends. Nowadays I am studied in a senior school. I can help you learn China and Chinese culture in some ways. If you will come here, we’ll stay together so that you’ll have chances to practice speaking and listening Chinese, at the same time I can learn English. I’ll show you around some famous attractions such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace for which you can have a good knowledge about Chinese culture.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

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