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20．假如你是李华，于11月12日到达纽约，然后去找你的美国朋友Tom，但他不在家．请按以下内容给Tom留张便条．
火车晚点15分钟，与接你的Tom错过；
在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor把你带到Tom家，Tom不在；
现在Taylor夫妇家；
务必今晚打电话给你64611128．
注意：1．词数100左右
      2．不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
      3．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm in New York!___________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类写作．提纲类的写作是比较容易的文体，题目中给出一些要点，根据这些要点完成写作．对于这类文体应有尤其注意审题．首先要审要求．书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点．接下来就要审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等，而此题明显属于便条类写作．再次要审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的．写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的"某人"，如"假设你是李华"，写作时即用第一人称"我"，即李华．最后审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事．此题目中要点给出来的并不多，需要考生自行组织，自由发挥，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．同时在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型，不要遗漏任何的要点，同时要使用合适的连接词来连接整个文章，使文章更有条理性．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了很多地道的英语句型，如It's really a pity that I didn't find you at the railway station．You may have left when my train arrived a quarter behind the schedule．这两个是形式主语和时间状语从句的用法．It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening．这句话中，cannot be better的用法也很巧妙．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm in New York!It's really a pity that I didn't find you at the railway station．You may have left when my train arrived a quarter behind the schedule．（高分句式一）
Luckily，on the train I came across Mr．Taylor and his wife，who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years．（高分句式二）Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station，they offered to drive me to your house．
As you happen to be out，I've decided to accept the Taylors'offer to stay at their house for the night．（高分句式三  as引导的非限制性定语从句）I've decided to put up here for the night．They are very friendly to me，so don't worry about me．I'll be all right．It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening．（高分句式四）
Looking forward to meeting you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 写作中一些技巧：
1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步．所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料．
2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架．文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾．
3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇．扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容．展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等．可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式．

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