Question

假定英语诹上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now that it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．

Answer 1

1.exciting改为excited

2.closely改为close

3.Because改为Though/Although

4.sorrow with改为sorrow for

5.when second改为when the second

6.other class改为another class

7.it was改为it is

8.that 去掉

9.but改为and

10.out改为in

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题。

1. felt exciting该句中主语为I。故exciting改为excited

2. close to：意为离...近。 I felt I was so closely to university句子so为副词，用来形容形容词close。故closely改为close

3. the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends应理解为即使学业艰难，但我还是和同学分享喜怒哀乐，前后表转折。故Because改为Though/Although

4. with改为sorrow for。考查固定搭配。Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends应理解为即使学业艰难，但我还是和同学分享喜怒哀乐，share sth with sb：与...分享..。故将sorrow with改为sorrow for

5. second改为when the second。考查序数词的用法。序数词表示事物的顺序，它一般跟定冠词the一起出现在可数的单数名词之前，When the second year came：意为第二年到了的时候。故when second改为when the second

6. class改为another class。考查other的用法，other表示其他的，通常与可数名词复数连用，another表示三者或三者以上中的另外一个，通常与可数名词单数连用。I was arranged to other class应理解为我被安排到另外一个班级。故other class改为another class

7. was改为it is。考查时态。Now it was the last year of my high school life意为现在是我高中生涯的最后一年。由now可知用一般现在时。故it was改为it is

8.that 去掉。Now that 意为既然；而在此句中所要表达的是当前，是一个时间状语。故将that 去掉。

9. it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress意为这是我高中的最后一年，我决定学习更刻苦，取得更好的进步，根据句意可知前后只是顺承关系。故but改为and

10. out：分发；精疲力竭。give in ：放弃。High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out意为高中生活对我来说具有挑战性，但我不会放弃的。故out改为in

考点：考查短文理解及语法知识