Question

【题目】请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，介绍一位你最崇拜的偶像。

字数要求：120词左右。

1. Who do you admire (钦佩，欣赏) most?

2. What does / did he / she do?

3. Something interesting / moving you know about him / her.

4. What should you learn from him / her?

Answer 1

【答案】

Thomas Edison is the person I admire. He was one of the greatest scientists in the world. He was born in 1847, and died in 1931 at the age of 84. He was in school only for three months. His teacher didn’t like him at all. Edison’s mother had to take him out of school and taught him herself. At home Edison read a lot and became very interested in science.

When Edison was very young, he had many strange ideas. When he was in school, he often asked a lot of questions. Most of them had nothing to do with his lessons. However, it is these strange ideas that helped him a lot. When he grew up, he became a famous scientist.

I think I should work hard at my lessons at school, and always try to be creative in order to do something good for our motherland and the world as well.

【解析】

具体到本次写作，本文要求根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，介绍一位最崇拜的偶像。文章的要点是以英文提示给出的，1. Who do you admire (钦佩，欣赏) most? 2. What does / did he / she do? 3. Something interesting / moving you know about him / her. 4. What should you learn from him / her?考生要围绕这几个问题来展开，明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。