题目内容
4.根据下面提示以"Have a Healthy Life"为题写一篇短文1.简述以下现象:
(1)健康的重要性
(2)青少年忽视健康的不良习惯:长时间看电视,通宵上网…
(3)导致的危害:影响视力,身体虚弱…
2.简述你的看法,提出你的建议.
要求:1.内容完整,层次清楚,语言流畅.
2.词数120左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数.
3.参考词汇:视力 eyesight
Have a Healthy Life
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分析 本题是提纲类作文写作,文章题材和体裁已经给出,无需考生过多考虑.而考生重点要注意审题,只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性.审题主要要做到以下几点:一审题时要仔细看写作要求不可漏掉要点.写作时,一定要切题,抓住中心,紧扣要点.不要丢三落四,要点不全.通过对众多提示分析,获取与写作内容有关的主要信息,并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来,找出最密切相关的要点,列出写作提纲.
亮点句型一:Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.只有当我们健康,我们才能好好学习,享受生活.这是一个倒装句,only引导的时间状语从句when we are healthy至于句首,主句要做部分倒装.
亮点句型二:And they spend too much time watching TV,playing games and chatting on the Internet all night,which does great harm to their health.他们花了太多的时间看电视,玩游戏和聊天在互联网上一整夜,这对他们的健康有很大的危害.这是一个非限制性定语从句,which指代前文主句的内容.
解答 Have a Healthy Life
As we all know,health is of great importance to us.Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.(亮点句型一)【健康的重要性】
However,many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health,especially during the holiday.And they spend too much time watching TV,playing games and chatting on the Internet all night,which does great harm to their health.(亮点句型二)First,this may make them get near-sighted.Besides,their bodies become much weaker.Thirdly,they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out,which may have a bad effect on their mental health.【不良习惯和危害】
In my opinion,they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer.Go out to take some exercise,play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle.【个人观点】
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

Anger can benefit relationships
Showing anger is natural when you are misunderstood and it's a way of communicating that sense of unfairness.But society tells us anger is dangerous and we should hide it.The problem is that when you hide your anger,your partner doesn't know they've done something wrong.And so they keep doing it,which will harm your relationship.So,the expression of anger can sometimes benefit relationships.
Anger provides self-change
Anger can also help you realize your own faults if you allow it.If we can notice when we get angry and why,then we can learn what to do to improve our lives.Anger can encourage self-change.
Anger reduces fighting
Although anger often causes physical fighting,it can also be a way of reducing it.That's because it's a very strong social signal (标志) that a situation needs to be dealt with.When others see the signal they are more encouraged to try and comfort the angry people.
Title | Benefits of Getting Mad |
61of getting angry | 1.Make you feel bad. 2.Make you do things(62)stupidly 3.Make yourself(63)destroyed |
Advantages of getting angry | 1.(64)Benefitrelationships ●Reacting to being misunderstood by someone else is quite(65)natural. ●Hiding anger will do(66)harmto your relationship. ●(67)expressinganger can sometimes benefit relationships. |
2.Provide self-change ●Noticing when to get angry and why can help to(68)improve our lives. ●Anger can encourage you to(69)change yourself. | |
3.Reduce fighting ●Anger is a strong social signal that a situation needs dealing with. ●The signal will help(70)comfortthe angry people. |
I asked him(45)B.He told me he had just come from JFK airport without a customer,which means﹩70 in lost fare(车费),a fairly big deal.I tried to share his(46)C.(47)A,he calmed down.He mentioned he had read an article saying that the happiest people are those who give.(48)D,he hoped to have more chances to(49)D in his life,I was starting to(50)C being with him!
Arriving at my destination,I paid him,giving a generous tip.I also pulled out an extra﹩20 and said,"Sir,I share the same(51)Aof giving with you.Here's an extra little bit.(52)Bit,since you've already(53)C﹩70 from JFK.But,ifyouwantto(54)A the power of the gift,give it to the next(55)D."
For a moment I thought I was so(56)B!But the driver(57 )Cme by saying,"Sir,I have a(58)Didea.
You give that﹩20 to a homeless person and I will gift the next rider for free."
It was a/an (59)A meeting the driver and learning the lesson of how everyone is able to give and surprise another with their(60)B.
41.A.taken up | B.picked up | C.sent up | D.put up |
42.A.serious | B.cruel | C.horrible | D.strict |
43.A.ride | B.flight | C.way | D.distance |
44.A.free | B.calm | C.busy | D.silent |
45.A.how | B.why | C.what | D.where |
46.A.delight | B.worry | C.unhappiness | D.surprise |
47.A.Gradually | B.Fortunately | C.Normally | D.Obviously |
48.A.Otherwise | B.However | C.Besides | D.Therefore |
49.A.forgive | B.share | C.take | D.give |
50.A.mind | B.regret | C.enjoy | D.hate |
51.A.idea | B.action | C.practice | D.story |
52.A.Forget | B.Keep | C.Put | D.Pay |
53.A.earned | B.saved | C.lost | D.wasted |
54.A.experience | B.exchange | C.transformed | D.get |
55.A.tourist | B.conductor | C.stranger | D.passenger |
56.A.bad | B.cool | C.silly | D.simple |
57.A.disappointed | B.satisfied | C.surprised | D.encouraged |
58.A.newer | B.further | C.worse | D.better |
59.A.honor | B.reward | C.amusement | D.comfort |
60.A.money | B.generosity | C.power | D.gift |
Thirty years ago,there wasn't nearly as much blatant (公然的) disrespect for elders,peers,or other people in general.At that time,young people were taught that to get anything or get anywhere in life,they'd have to work for it and earn it.
If young people aren't being taught the basics of respecting others,and aren't being taught that they need to work to make a living,then where are they to learn courage?
Courage isn't necessarily about risking your life,for whatever reason.It is about being able to face any kind of hardship,and to make decisions and face the consequences of those decisions.
Courage means being able to learn from hard times,and to take those lessons with you through life.It means having the resourcefulness (足智多谋) to find ways to deal with your problems yourself,and not being afraid to do so.
Too many young people now rely on parents,siblings,older relatives and others to get them through life.Too often they turn to these figures whenever they get into trouble,and expect to have their problems solved for them.
If we are to help our young people become more courageous,we should stop spoiling them,stop doing everything for them,and teach them the skills necessary to make basic life decisions on their own.
Once these basic principles are instilled (灌输) in our young people,I think we'll find that they are more courageous than we could have dreamed,and more like the young people of thirty years ago than we had ever imagined.
It's time to go back to older values and ideas,and to bring courage back into our young people and society.
Theme | (66)Comparedwith young people 30 years ago,th ose are less courageous. |
The behavior of young people today | They generally show no(67)respectfor elders and other people. They take for granted whatever they have or receive. Many of them (68)dependon their parents or other relatives to get them through life. |
(69)Reasons/Causes | They are not (70)awareof the basics of respecting others. They are not taught to work hard to make a (71)realize/live. They don't have the (72)abilityto make wise decisions and overcome difficulties independently. They tend to expect others,such as their parents or siblings,to help them out when they are in (73)trouble/difficulty. |
Tips | Never (74)spoilthem; only help them when necessary. Teach them the skills they need to make basic life decisions by themselves. |
Conclusion | It's time we went back to older values and ideas,and (75)Broughtcourage back into our young people and society. |