Question

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One                         
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day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the
which                                       for
money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half
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myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed
when
him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I
later   gave
was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

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