Question

7．近年来我市大力打造旅游产业，以此推动经济的发展．现请你根据表格内容，谈谈 你的看法并就此提出建议．

主要优点	促进交流，了解我市历史文化；提供就业机会，推动经济发展．
负面影响	破坏环境，造成污染；游客大量涌入，引起交通堵塞．
你的建议	…

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写全要点，包括：优点，缺点，建议；其次要用第一人称来叙述；最后要以现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
speed up the development 加快发展
crowd in 大量涌入
keep the balance of nature 保持自然平衡
be aware of 知道，清楚，明白
It can also provide more chances for jobs，which leads to the quick development of local economy．
句中which引导非限制性定语从句．
What's more，too many tourists crowding in will bring about heavy traffic jams．
句中crowding in是现在分词修饰主语．
it's necessary to develop tourism to benefit both the local people and economy．
it is+形容词+动词不定式，表示做某事怎样；it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．

解答 There are many tourist sites in our region．These years，the city government has been speeding up the development of the tourism industry．Tourism can promote cultural exchange and help people learn about local history．It can also provide more chances for jobs，which leads to the quick development of local economy．（高分句型一）Besides，it can enrich our lives and improve our living conditions．【说明优点】
      However，tourism may cause serious pollution and do damage to the natural environment．What's more，too many tourists crowding in will bring about heavy traffic jams．（高分句型二）【指出缺点】
     In my opinion，it's necessary to develop tourism to benefit both the local people and economy．（高分句型三） Meanwhile，some measures should be taken to keep the balance of nature and at the same time we should get more people to be aware of environment protection．【提出建议】

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．