题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你和同学组建了一个名为“Starry Skies”的乐队。你的朋友美国留学生Mike擅长吉他演奏,请你给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他加入乐队。内容要点如下:
1.写信目的; 2.乐队介绍; 3.排练时间和地点。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Recently, my schoolmates and I have organized a band named “Starry Skies”. Now I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Our band is made up of a group of young people who are keen on pop music and seek to practice and perform together. We gather at our school music hall to practice from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. every Saturday afternoon. I know that you are an enthusiastic music lover like us and that you are very good at playing the guitar. We really hope that you can be our guitarist. We will surely have some gorgeous music experiences together.
Please feel free to contact me if you are interested. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封电子邮件,是提纲式作文。写作时要认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。本文根据提纲可分三段来写,第一段寒暄之后表明写信目的;第二段介绍自己的乐队和排练时间和地点,并说明为什么要邀请Mike加入自己的乐队;第三段则是期待对方的答复。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇电子邮件,格式正确,语句流畅,结构布局合理,同时使用高级句子。开头一句How are you doing?显得亲切自然;a band named "Starry Skies".过去分词作后置定语;Our band is made up of a group of young people who are keen on pop music and seek to practice and perform together. who引导的定语从句用在句中;I know that you are an enthusiastic music lover like us and that you are very good at playing the guitar.两个that引导的宾语从句并列句中;Please feel free to contact me if you are interested.祈使句和if条件句搭配句中。