Question

Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, but I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were seldom available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly increased my confident and got me motivated.

My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 a→an

 disappointing→disappointied

 去掉but

 on→in

 best前加the

 work→worked

 seldom→always

 student→students

 confident→confidence

 which→that

【解析】

试题分析：本文通过自己从考试不及格到成为一共尖子生的转变告诉我们：态度决定高度》

 a→an考查冠词。根据后面形容词important是元音音素开头，用an ,所以a 改成an .

 disappointing→disappointied  考查形容词，--ed结尾的形容词指人，感到….,----ing 结尾的形容词指物，令人…,根据后面主语是我，所以是感到失望，所以

 去掉but。考查连词。前面有连词as尽管，虽然，不能与but连用，所以去掉but。

 on→in考查介词。根据固定短语：in class，在课上，所以把on改成in。

 best前加the考查冠词。根据固定短语：make the best of 充分利用，所以在best前加the .

 work→worked  考查时态。本文讲述的是三年以前的经历，所以应该用一般过去时，所以work改成worked。

 seldom→always 考查副词和句意。句意：无论何时我遇到困难，他们总是愿意提供帮助。Seldom，几乎不，always，总是，一直，所以seldom改成always。

 student→students 考查名词单复数。根据短语：one …，…中的一个，后跟复数名词，所以student改成students.

 confident→confidence考查词性。根据前面my + 名词，而confident是形容词，所以改成名词形式：confidence。

 which→that 考查连词，根据固定句型：It was …that…构成强调句型，所以把which改成that。

考点：考查短文改错。