Question

【题目】随着近年来城市发展速度的加快，很多反映城市历史风貌的古建筑屡遭破坏。就这个问题请你以How to Protect the Ancient Buildings 为题向某英语报社投稿。

要点如下：1.很多古建筑被拆

2. 呼吁拯救这些古建筑

3. 希望有合理的解决方法。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Protect the Ancient Buildings

In recent years, as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people. They want to make room for housing or offices during urban construction. Do you think we should try to protect those old buildings or replace them with the modern ones?

I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city. And the young will learn a lot when they visit the historical relic sites. The government and related departments should find a suitable solution to the problem. As a citizen, it is my and everyone's duty to spare no effort to take any way to protect the historical property.

【解析】试题分析：

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息以How to Protect the Ancient Buildings 为题写一篇文章向某英语报社投稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：写作目的：城市的建设使得古建筑被拆，呼吁拯救古建筑；内容：描述现状，呼吁拯救古建筑以及希望采取合理的解决方案。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该以一般现在时态为主。4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】

本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达： 1.使用高级句型：many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people.现在进行时的被动语态；I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings使用宾语从句；As a citizen, it is my and everyone's duty to spare no effort to take any way to protect the historical property.用it作形式主语的用法。2.使用了重要短语：make room for给……腾出地方，腾出空间；take measures采取措施；spare no effort to不遗余力的。