Question

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假如你是李华，你所在的社区给每户居民都发放了一张"邻里互助卡"，居民互帮互助，互助卡架起了一座连心桥．请将这一情况反映给某报社，并发表自己的看法．
注意：（1）词数 100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）不得在作文中提及任何考生个人信息
参考词汇：互助卡 a help card  和谐的 harmonious   社区 community 
Dear editor，
I am Li Hua，a senior middle school student．I'm glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card．
Recently，the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious．If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息你所在的社区给每户居民都发放了一张"邻里互助卡"，居民互帮互助，互助卡架起了一座连心桥．请将这一情况反映给某报社，并发表自己的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点，分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题．2、要根据图画进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态，就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
（高分句型一）If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．
该句使用了if引导的条件状语从句；where引导的定语从句；
（高分句型二）If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it
该句使用了if引导的条件状语从句；who引导定语从句，修饰先行词a neighbor．

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student． I'm glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card．
   Recently，the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious．（高分句型一）If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．（高分句型二）If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it，according to the information offered by the card．If you are ill，but you can't find a doctor at night，you can get help from the card．This is very useful，especially for the old left alone at home．
   I think if people can help each other，the world will be a better place to live in．Don't you think so？
                                                                                                                Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．