题目内容
假设你是李华,最近你与最好的朋友之间发生了一件不愉快的事情,使你很苦恼无措,所以写信给某英文报“HEART—TO—HEART”专栏的编辑Ruth求助。要点如下:
1.描述事情经过;
2.表达你的感受;
3.向Ruth求助。
注意: 1.词数:100—120;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ruth,
I’m writing to ask you for help.__________________________________________________
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Yours
Li Hua
One possible version:
Recently I am having some trouble with my friend Helen, which makes me very upset. This is how it happened.
A few months ago, Helen did something wrong at school. She told me about it but wouldn’t like the teacher or any other classmate to know it. So she asked me to keep it a secret. I promised her. But then one day, Helen came back from the teacher’s office and shouted at me angrily, saying that I had broken my promise and let out her secret to the teacher. But I really did not do it. However hard I tried to explain to her, she simply wouldn’t listen to me and decided to break up with me. I feel greatly wronged but really do not know what to do. This event affects my normal life and study. Can you help me with my trouble?
I am looking forward to your reply.
【解析】
试题分析:
根据提示可知,这是一篇书信类作文。书信类作文和一般的话题作文或材料作文不同,它主要由三部分组成:开始,正文,结束语。在文章的开始部分要以简短的语句表明自己的意图及简单的自我介绍。第二段详细描述写作意图。分析出题者的要求可知,并没有详细说是某件事,这给写作者留下很大的发挥空间。所以在第二段描述事件发展经过的时候,可以根据自己的写作能力选择描述一件生活中发生的事情。并向编辑Ruth请求帮助。在写完正文之后,就只剩下结束语了。可以在最后一段表明自己的苦恼和请求,也可以只用一到两句常用语结束全文。
【亮点说明】
本篇范文结构清晰,层次分明,尤其是文章的篇章布局让阅卷老师一目了然。如在文章的第一段以非限制性定语从句Recently I am having some trouble with my friend Helen, which makes me very upset表明自己的苦恼和写作意图,然后以This is how it happened表示事件的开始。第二段以A few months ago开头,交待了事件发生的时间,之后长短句结合,如She told me about it but wouldn’t like the teacher or any other classmate to know it.和 I promised her. 再以转折连词引导时间状语But then one day可知,事情的发展起了变化。最后以This event affects my normal life and study表明这件事对自己的影响,同时也是这件事的结束部分。值得一提的是在描述事情的开始,发展,转折和结束的过程中,作者用到了很多高级词汇和短语,例如break one’s promise, let out her secret, break up with me和looking forward to等等。这也是文章的一大亮点。