Question

9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I just come back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．We visited to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford，where I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful，but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most exciting thing for me in Britain was what I made a lot of friends there．

Answer 1

分析 上周我从英国回来．我很幸运成为参观英国的学生之一．我们参观了很多地方，伦敦，牛津，和大湖区．我学到了很多伦敦的历史文化．我喜欢牛津，那里有很多古老的建筑．大湖区很美，可惜我们去的时候下雨．最开心的是我在那交了很多朋友．

解答 I just come back from Britain last week．
         came
I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．
         lucky                                                                        countries
We visited to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．
               去掉                                                  and
I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．
                                                                                        which
I also liked Oxford，where I saw much more old buildings．
                                                many
The Lake District was beautiful，but it was∧pity that it rained heavily when they were there．
                                                               加a                                               we
The most exciting thing for me in Britain was what I made a lot of friends there．
                                                                  that
1．come改为came．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．luckily改为lucky．句中lucky是作系动词的表语，要用形容词．
3．country改为countries．句意表达的是不同的国家，要用复数．
4．to去掉．visit是及物动词，后面不需要加介词．
5．or改为and．句意表达的是并列，不是选择．
6．where改为which．句中was my favorite是一个非限制性定语从句，从句缺少主语，要用关系代词；句意指的是抽象名词历史文化，要用which来指代．
7．much改为many．句中修饰的是复数名词buildings，要用many．
8．加a．固定搭配，it is a pity真遗憾．
9．they改为we．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是我们．
10．what改为that．句中I made a lot of friends there是作系动词的表语，是一个表语从句；从句结构完整，表达的是一个事实，要用从属连接that连接．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．