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3．假如你是李明，你的朋友李华准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平．请发e-mail告知他学习英语的方法．
提示：1．养成良好的英语学习习惯（如：…）；
2．多看英语电视和电影；扩大词汇量；
3．要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的朋友李华准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平．请发e-mail告知他学习英语的方法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：养成良好的英语学习习惯（如：…）；多看英语电视和电影；扩大词汇量；要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：develop good habits形成好的习惯；look up查阅；do you a lot of good对你有好处；Furthermore而且；have a good knowledge of精通；Last but certainly not least最后同样最重要；be afraid of害怕
Setting aside an hour each day to read English，learning English passages by heart，looking up the dictionary when coming across new words，to name a few，will surely do you a lot of good．（高分句型一）
That will not only teach you many English slangs and phrases which are widely used，but also develop your understanding of English culture．（高分句型二）
Just as an old saying goes，failure and success always come hand in hand．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
      I'm glad to offer you some advice．If you are to learn English well，the first step on the right way is to develop good habits．Setting aside an hour each day to read English，learning English passages by heart，looking up the dictionary when coming across new words，to name a few，will surely do you a lot of good．（高分句型一）
      Furthermore，it's a fair bet that you can have a good knowledge of English by watching English TV shows and movies．That will not only teach you many English slangs and phrases which are widely used，but also develop your understanding of English culture．（高分句型二）
      Last but certainly not least，it's your self-confidence that leads you to reach your goals and truly make a difference．So，why not speak and use English as much as possible？Just as an old saying goes，failure and success always come hand in hand．（高分句型三）Don't be afraid of making mistakes and just consider English as a piece of cake．Enjoy it!
                                                                                                                                                                                     Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．