Question

【题目】假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）

个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）

你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）

注意：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, and I’m independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position. I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如As far as I am concerned，be good for，result in，be qualified for，apply for，；which非限定性定语从句；并注意了句子的衔接如：both，and，because，等等。