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书面表达(满分25分)
高考即将来临，家长们也在想方设法为孩子做好服务。下面一幅图是关于某些家长的做法，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的理解。短文必须包括以下内容：
1. 图画内容反映了什么？
2.你对家长做法的看法。
3.你的建议。

注意：1、必须包括所有要点，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
3、文中不得提及你所在学校与本人姓名。
参考词汇：倒计时牌          a countdown board 
过度关心和监管    excessive care and supervision
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, parents are making great efforts to help their child to prepare for it.
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Answer 1

With the College Entrance Examination around the corner, parents are making great efforts to help their child to prepare for it. As is seen in the cartoon, Dad is setting a countdown board, saying that the college entrance examination is 11 days away, while mum is cheering the daughter “Come on!”. What is illustrated in the picture is that parents expect too much of their child and try every means to encourage her to work harder. However, the daughter feels unhappy, or rather more stressed.
As far as I’m concerned, what the parents think is right, but what they do is wrong. Some students feel stressed at school with the time approaching. When they get home, the countdown board and mother’s words will cause them to become more stressed, which has a bad effect on their moods. As a result, they can’t focus on the study.
So it’s necessary that parents know what their child needs most at this critical moment. Giving excessive care and supervision only add to the child’s anxiety. It is a regular routine that helps to promote quality revision. Besides, parents should provide relaxing atmosphere for study.
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