题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,在英国参加夏令营,所在地有多国中学生夏令营团队。当地计划为你 们举行联谊晚会。请写一封邮件报名参会,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2. 你们的节目;
3. 合理建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mr/Ms,
We really appreciate your kindness to host such a nice party. Thank you very much! I'm writing to tell you we're glad to accept your invitation.
We have two programmes, a group of five boys singing a Chinese song and three girls performing a Chinese dance. The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams, while the dance is about how Chinese minority girls looking for a better life.
By the way, we'd appreciate it if the party were on next Thursday, when we have no other activities.
Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英国夏令营组织写信,同意参加联谊会。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1.写信目的;
2. 你们的节目;
3. 合理建议。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
tell sb. sth./ give sb. sth./ make an effort to do sth./ be strict with/ look for/ be glad to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
It is really nice of you to host such a party.
I'm writing to tell you we're glad to attend the party.
We have two programmes, and one is a group of five boys singing a Chinese song and the other is three girls performing a Chinese dance.
The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams.
The dance is about how Chinese minority girls looking for a better life.
We'd appreciate it if the party were on next Thursday, when we have no other activities.
Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)