Question

【题目】假定你是李华，当假期来临的时候，越来越多的人们选择去名校参观，但有的人反对将校园变为旅游区。请你就此现象给英语笔友Peter写封信阐述你的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Best,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How are you going these days?I'm writing this letter to share the topic of "Should universities be open to tourists?" with you.

Nowadays,more and more people enjoy their holidays by visiting famous universities.This phenomenon has led to heated debates concerning "Should universities be open to tourists".Some people believe that it is good to open universities to tourists while others argue against it.

Personally speaking,I'm in favor of university tourism,which benefits both tourists and universities.The beautiful scenery and the strong academic atmosphere of famous universities encourage tourists,especially students, to set goals and work hard to reach them.As for famous universities,being open to tourists serves as an effective approach to attracting talents from all over the country.

What's your opinion about the topic? I'm looking forwarding to your reply.

Best,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇书信类作文，针对当假期来临的时候，越来越多的人们选择去名校参观，但有的人反对将校园变为旅游区的现象来写信表达自己的看法。

考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.书信格式要正确，信件开头结尾格式基本固定，根据题干要求对写信对象进行调整。例如本篇作文中，收件人是Peter，写信人为Li Hua。

2.书信一般要开门见山，交代下写信件原因，便于读信人了解书信重点，点明了这篇书信话题是关于“大学应不应该对游客开放”。

3.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。

4.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把各方观点叙述清楚，特别是注意阐述自己的观点，细节把控要到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

1. “Some people believe that it is good to open universities to tourists while others argue against it.”这里采用了“believe that……”的宾语从句，“that”后解释了“believe”的内容，使观点更鲜明流畅。

2.第三段运用了Personally speaking连接词，后面阐述了自己的观点， 使文章行文流畅，逻辑清晰，观点更明确。

3. .“As for famous universities,being open to tourists serves as an effective approach to attracting talents from all over the country.”此句“being open to tourists serves”动名词用作主语，运用了高级句式，提高了文章整体的语言色彩。