Question

写作（共两节，满分 35 分）
【小题1】请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

Dear John,
I’m very glad to have the honor to write to you after I’ve read your notice on the Internet.
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese and Chinese culture, I can’t wait to be your friend and offer my faithful help to you. We can share what we have and develop our understanding of each other’s country. If you like, I’ll send you some Chinese Fairy Tales. In this way you can learn some Chinese culture. We can also exchange our thoughts in learning and life. What’s your opinion?
I’m looking forward to your reply and let’s be close friends from now on.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。加拿大高中生John在互联网上登出启事（notice）,希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。你用英语给John发一封电子邮件，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的We can share what we have and develop our understanding of each other’s country.使用了what引导的宾语从句，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
考点：考查书信类短文写作。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。