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10．近年来私家车的增多，引起了一些社会问题．有些大城市正在考虑是否控制汽车的总量，但不同的人有不同的观点和看法．请根据下列提示用英语写一篇100词左右的短文．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
1．支持者认为：可解决交通拥堵问题，并且能减少环境污染．
2．反对者认为：私家车方便出行，快捷和省时，并且能促进经济发展．
3．你的观点和建议．
The rapid increase of private cars in recent years has brought about some social problems．                 ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文．随着私家车的增多，引起了一些社会问题．有些大城市正在考虑是否控制汽车的总量，不同的人有不同的观点和看法，阐述支持者或反对者的观点及自己的观点．
写作要点：1．支持者认为：可解决交通拥堵问题，并且能减少环境污染；2．反对者认为：私家车方便出行，快捷和省时，并且能促进经济发展；3．你的观点和建议．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重要短语：cause problems（引起问题），be crowded（拥挤），traffic jams（交通阻塞），sth be available（可得到，可利用），be encouraged to do sth（盯鼓励某人做某事），promote sth （提升，促进某物），contribute to sth （促进，有助于某事），bring convenience to sth （带来便捷），raise the cost of sth（提高成本），take measures to do sth （采取措施作某事），solve the problem （解决问题），regulate the traffic（管理交通）．
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1．They suggest cities improve public transportation and people be encouraged to ride bicycles．
They suggest cities improve the management of traffic and raise the cost of using cars．
两个句子都是由"suggest"构成的宾语从句，从句中用了虚拟语气，省略should．
2．They hold the opinion①that the increase of private cars will promote the car industry，②which contributes greatly to the development of the country's economy．
①此处是由that引导的同位语从句，that在从句中起连接词的作用，无意义，that引导的从句解释说明名词"opinion"的内容．
②此处是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面主句的内容．

解答 How I Overcame Depression
The rapid increase of private cars in recent years has caused some social problems．Some big cities are considering whether to control the number of cars．Different people have different ideas about it．（引出话题）
Some people think it necessary to do so．For one thing，the roads are so crowded that traffic jams can be seen everywhere．For another，there're not enough parking areas available for cars．Besides，by controlling ears，we can reduce air pollution around us．They suggest cities improve public transportation and people be encouraged to ride bicycles．【高分句型】（支持者的观点）
However，some people think it unreasonable．They hold the opinion that the increase of private cars will promote the car industry，which contributes greatly to the development of the country's economy．【高分句型】Moreover，cars bring convenience to people and save them a lot of time．They suggest cities improve the management of traffic and raise the cost of using cars．【高分句型】（反对者的观点）
In my opinion，we should take measures to solve the problem．Laws should be passed to regulate the traffic．And cities should build more subways so that people can have a better choice for travel．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．