假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
One afternoon after I was on my way home，the weather changed suddenly．Dark clouds were gathered．I began to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat or umbrella about me．It soon started to rain. Just as 1 was hurrying home, I heard of someone calling me from behind．I turn to have a look and found that he
was Liu Wei, a good neighbor of mine．He offered to share his umbrella with me．We walked all the ways home．With Liu Wei’s help, I would have got wet to the skin．How thankful 1 was to his help!

【小题1】after改为 when
【小题2】gathered改为 gathering
【小题3】both 改为either;
【小题4】umbrella前加 an 去掉 of
【小题5】turn 改为turned
【小题6】he改为 it
【小题7】ways 改为way
【小题8】With改为 Without
【小题9】to 改为 for

解析【小题1】when引导时间状语从句，当…时候
【小题2】乌云在聚集是主动式：gathered改为 gathering
【小题3】后面是：a raincoat 说明不是两者都both，而是两者任何一个， either;
【小题4】umbrella是可数名词前加 an
【小题5】听见某人做什么：hear sb doing，去掉 of
【小题6】考查时态，这篇文章用过去时，turn 改为turned
【小题7】表示不确定的人用it，he改为 it
【小题8】all the way home回家的路上
【小题9】考查介词：意为：没有刘磊的帮助，我们就会湿透了。With改为 Without
【小题10】考查介词：be thankful for对…感激，to 改为 for

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
How time flies! We will have to say goodbye after a week, but I will never forget the beautiful days when we spent together. In my memory, you are such kind a person that you will always offer me help wherever I get into trouble. You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.
Do you still remember that night twenty years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, you carried me to nearest hospital. Moreover, you attended to me careful while I was staying in hospital. Later, you managed to help me with my lesson. Without your help, I can not have passed the exam. Though we are parting soon, but I will keep the favors you’ve ever done me in mind.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what

to stop wasting water. One of the steps that we should take are to find ways of

reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and

then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a

purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials

by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and

reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

If you park your car in the wrong place, the traffic policeman will soon find. You will be very luck if he lets you to go without a ticket. Therefore, this does not always happen. Traffic police are sometimes very politely. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this note in my car: 'sir, we welcome you to our city. This is a "No Parking" area. You will enjoy your stay here if you pay attention to your street signs. This note is only a reminder.' Whether you receive a request like this, you can not fail to obey it!

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

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forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

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mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

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　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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