题目内容
【题目】假如你是吴鹏,根据以下提示给同学李维写封回信,建议如何克服考试的压力及紧张情绪。词数:120个左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1.告诉他大部分同学考试前都紧张,要有正确态度;
2.平时努力学习,做好准备,不要太在意结果;
3.考前适当运动,如散步等;
4.充分的睡眠有助于发挥,睡前洗个热水澡、喝杯热牛奶有助于睡眠;
5.……
Dear Li Wei,
Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in overcoming the pressure of exams. Don't worry. Let me give you some advice.
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Yours,
Wu Peng
【答案】Dear Li Wei,
Glad to hear from you. You say you have some problems in overcoming the pressure of exams. Don't worry. Let me give you some advice.
As a matter of fact, most of us middle school students feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. There is no doubt that exams are important to us students, but it's more important to have a right attitude towards them. Therefore, try to study hard every day and make good preparations for exams but don't worry too much about the results. And I think it's good to go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam. A hot bath or a cup of hot milk before going to bed might help you have a sound sleep.
Don't worry too much about exams and try to relax yourself. I am sure you will do well in the exam. Good luck.
Yours,
Wu Peng
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封书信。根据以下提示给同学李维写封回信,建议如何克服考试的压力及紧张情绪。内容提示:告诉他大部分同学考试前都紧张,要有正确态度;平时努力学习,做好准备,不要太在意结果;考前适当运动,如散步等;充分的睡眠有助于发挥,睡前洗个热水澡、喝杯热牛奶有助于睡眠;……。根据所给提示,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,要点齐全,语句精炼,文中使用高级词汇、句子。most of us middle school students feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam.同位语和时间状语从句完美结合;使用固定句式There is no doubt that---;having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make it possible for us to perform well in the exam.动名词短语做主语;另外,As a matter of fact, Therefore, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。