[题目]假定你是李华.暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职.已写好申请书和个人简历.给外教Mr. Jenkins 写信.请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式.注意: 1. 词数100左右, 2. 可以适当增加细节.已使行文连贯. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr. Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.

I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I would be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and the resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于应用文写作，话题已给出，写作可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时注意语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】语言简练，衔接紧密，层次分明，运用高级句子。I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. and将两个句子连接起来，尽显章法； I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. 使用定语从句；I know you have a very busy schedule, but I would be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. 含宾语从句的复合句和含条件状语从句的复合句用but连接起来；However, 在句中的使用恰到好处。

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