题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的朋友Mary因为缺乏运动而生病。请给她写一封信,劝说她康复以后多参加体育活动,每天锻炼一个小时,以增强身体素质。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise. This is harmful to your health. You have been in poor health these years. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.
Do not think that time spent in exercise is wasted. Exercise can improve your physical health and refresh the mind. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling exhausted.
I am not advising you to devote all your time to exercise. What I want to say is that exercise is as useful and important as your study.
I hope you can take at least one hour’s exercise every day after you have recovered. I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.
Yours,
Mary
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封书信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文是一篇书信:假设你是李华,你的朋友Mary因为缺乏运动而生病。请给她写一封信,劝说她康复以后多参加体育活动,每天锻炼一个小时,以增强身体素质。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:had no time for exercise(没时间锻炼);in poor health(身体不好);without feeling exhausted(没有感到筋疲力尽);devote all your time to exercise(奉献所有的时间去锻炼)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
