题目内容
4.短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Yesterday is my best friend Li Ming's birthday.When the school was over,I went to the bookshop.I bought a book calling Exploring Space,and had them wrapped for him.Since he had wanted to buy this book for week.I knew that he would be very pleasing with my present.When I got the party,Li Ming said hello to me with a big smile.I noticed that there were much presents on the floor,and I was sure that mine would be her favourite.I gave the present to Li Ming and whispered in his ear,"You will love it."He could not wait to unwrap it.All of a sudden,the smile on his face disappeared.I looked and I saw some big red words on the cover of the book that said,Caring for Your Baby!I had picked up the wrong book in the shop!
分析 作者在本文中讲述了在朋友Li Ming生日时给朋友买了一本宇宙探险的书,叫人包好送给朋友作生日礼物,本以为会是朋友最喜欢的礼物,当朋友打开时却发生了尴尬的一幕:那居然是一本育儿的书.作者认为肯定是在书店拿错了书.
解答 Yesterday is my best friend Li Ming's birthday.When the school was over,I went to the bookshop.I bought a book calling Exploring Space,and had them wrapped for him.Since he had wanted to buy this book for week.I knew that he would be very pleasing with my present.When I got∧the party,Li Ming said hello to me with a big smile.I noticed that there were much presents on the floor,and I was sure that mine would be her favourite.I gave the present to Li Ming and whispered in his ear,"You will love it."He could not wait to unwrap it.All of a sudden,the smile on his face disappeared.I looked and I saw some big red words on the cover of the book that said,Caring for Your Baby!I had picked up the wrong book in the shop!
详解:
1.is改为was;考查动词的时态,根据本文讲的指昨天的事情,故用一般过去时.
2.去掉the;考查冠词,school is over是习惯用法,表示"放学了",前面不加冠词.
3.calling改为called;考查分词作定语,a book 与动词call之间是被动关系,此处用过去分词called作后置定语.
4.them改为it;考查人称代词,分析句子结构可知此处的人称代词指代前面的a book,故用it.
5.week改为weeks;考查名词,介词for后面跟时间段,表示一个动作持续一段时间.
6.pleasing改为pleased;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词修饰物,过去分词作形容词修饰人,故此处用pleased修饰he.
7.got后面加to;考查动词,get是不及物动词,后面接宾语时要加介词to.
8.much改为many;考查同义词辨析,much修饰不可数名词,many修饰可数名词的复数形式,所以此处用many.
9.and改为but;考查连词,分析句意"地上有很多礼物,单数我确定我的礼物会是他最喜欢的",故用but表示转折.
10.her改为his;考查形容词性物主代词,结合上文内容,文中的Li Ming应该是一位男生,故此处用his指"Li Ming's".
点评 阅读短文,了解大意,确定基本时态;运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系,找出文中错误加以修改.
A. | died away | B. | died out | C. | died down | D. | died off |