Question

假如你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手Eason（陈奕迅）

下个月将到你市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Eason的歌迷俱乐部(fan club)。请你给你的加拿大笔友Freddy发一封100词左右的e-mail，
内容包括：1.表达你们的喜悦之情，
2.简单介绍Eason的个人信息，或你们喜欢Eason的理由（3个），
4.希望Freddy也加入你们，一起分享喜悦。
注意：可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。下表里有些信息可以帮助你完成作文。

中文名：	陈奕迅
英文名：	Eason Chan
籍贯：	中国香港
评价：	开朗，才华洋溢，努力， 曲风独特，乐于助人，受年轻人的欢迎
职业：	歌手 演员
毕业院校：	英国金斯顿大学Kingston University
重要事件：	香港十大劲歌金曲最受欢迎男歌手 the most popular male singer of the top ten pop musicians in Hong Kong 台湾金曲奖最佳国语男歌手 the best Chinese pop singer in Taiwan
代表作品：	《K歌之王》”King of Karaoke”;《富士山下》”Under  Mount Fuji”等。

Dear Freddy，
I’m glad to tell you that Eason, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.
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Looking forward to your reply soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Freddy,
I’m glad to tell you that Eason, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.
I’m so pleased at the news that I decided to form a Eason fan club with some of my friends. Eason was born in Hong Kong. He was so good at singing that he used to win the prizes of “the most popular male singer of the top ten pop musicians in Hong Kong” and “the best Chinese pop singer in Taiwan” All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and talented! His songs, such as  “King of Karaoke” and “Under Mount Fuji” make us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him.
We can’t wait to see him face to face and to sing together with him! Why not come and join us to enjoy his wonderful performance in my city?
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Best wishes                                         Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。英语写作水平的高低包含的要素很多,而句子构造方式是非常重要的要素。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
考点：这是一封信。
点评：考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。