Question

课间休息时，有些学校利用多媒体来播放音乐，因此，很多学生对此有不同看法。假如昨天你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开了讨论。请你根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果。

【写作内容】

1.讨论的时间和讨论的问题； 2.学生们的观点： (1)大多数学生认为：活跃气氛，放松，带来快乐，学习效率高。 (2)部分学生认为：时间短，没效果；课间太吵，需要安静。 3.达成的共识：最好播放柔和并适合于中学生的音乐。

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

【参考词汇】

课间：during the class break       效率：efficiency           共识：agreement

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday we had a discussion about whether music should be played during the class break or not. Towards this, most of the students think that music should be played for it can produce a better efficiency and greater relaxation as well as a lively and happy atmosphere. However, some believe they can't get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is short. What is needed most during the class break is peace rather than the noise produced by music. After a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement that it' s better to play soft music, which is suitable for our middle school students as well.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。