Question

【题目】假设你是李华。你的外国朋友来信询问你的寒假生活和你对未来的憧憬。请写一封信进行回复。回信须包括如下要点：

1. 欢天喜地过春节；

2. 认真复习，准备高考；

3. 你所向往的大学及理由。

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I am pleased to hear from you. Now I will tell you something about my winter holiday.

As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday, so it goes without saying that spending some precious time with the family during the festival was the most important thing to do in this holiday. Of course we had dinners with delicious food and parties with classmates and friends.

However, I did not forget that I would take the College Entrance Examination in about 3 months. I made full use of my time to prepare myself for the examination, as I could not fail my first real test in my life.

My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from. I believe that Nankai University will help me to achieve my goal.

Looking forward to your next letter.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是伴随状语做修饰。 My dream university is Nankai University, which is located in my city, providing a wide range of courses for us to choose from.是非限制性定语从句，还有倒装句As is the same with every year, the Spring Festival was in the middle of the holiday。此外，文章还使用了大量短语hear from, it goes without, be located in, a wide range of等。以及连接副词however的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。