题目内容
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.家庭：
2．工作：
3.业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
One possible version：
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .
【解析】
试题分析：本文是一篇记叙文，主题是“十年后的我”。在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手，因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次分明，条理清晰。还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级亮点词汇来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。
【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。
考点：考查提纲作文。
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Many people believe that classical music is not relevant music is not relevant to young people today . However, this issue (问题) frequently causes heated debate.
Some people say that classical music is associated only with old people .For example, if you look at the audience at a classical concert , the majority is over the age of fifty.
Others say it is more popular than we first imagine . Many young people listen to classical music without realising .It is often used in films and advertisements. For example.a famous piece of classical music was used as the theme music for the 1990 World Cup . Not many people could have given its name , but millions enjoyed it .
Also,some people point out that young people produce new music based on classical ideas: for example, it is said that rap(说唱)music was invented by a classical musician in 1912, but it is now used by young people in pop music.
However, young people point to the fact that classical music has been outstripped(超越) by technology. To play a classical instrument, such as a violin, you need to study hard and practise for hours. Nowadays, you don't need to get aching arms from practising. A teenager can write and make music using a computer program in the comfort of their own bedroom.
A final point to in mind is that the term "classical music" is used to refer to a great variety of music, from jazz to pieces for large orchestras(管弦乐队).This makes it even more difficult to say whether classical music is relevant to young people.
So, it may be only a minority of young people who play classical instruments , but when it comes to enjoying classical music, it depends on the piece of music. It may be more relevant to young people in the modern world than they realise!
Title | Classical Music | |
Introduction | The issue of whether classical music is 1. to young people causes heated debate. | |
Opinions | Evidence | |
★ Classical music is associated only with old peonl. | ☆ 2. of the audience at a classical concert are over fifty. | |
★ Many young people don’t3. some music they listen to is classical. | ☆ Classical music is often found in films and advertisements. | |
★ Classical ideas provide a4. for producing new music. | ☆ Young people now5. rap in popular music. | |
★ 6. has put classical music at a disadvantage. | ☆ A young man can write and make music on a computer7. in his bedroom. | |
★ “Classical music”can refer to various 8. of music. | ☆ Classical music9. from jazz to pieces for large orchestras. | |
Conclusion | Classical music may still be10. by young people today. | |