Question

【题目】书面表达

中国人出国旅游的不文明行为越来越受到广泛关注。请以表格中所列举的事实为依据，写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

不文明行为	你的看法
在公共场所： 随地吐痰、乱丢垃圾、大声喧哗 ……	注意言谈举止、 爱护环境、维护中国人的形象 ……

注意：

1. 文章必须包括表格中的提示内容，可以增加细节使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4. 参考词汇：乱丢 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；声誉 reputation

As more and more Chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As more and more Chinese go travelling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The poor behaviors of some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. Since China has become an important part of the global village, we really need to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when travelling abroad. So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind your behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes. What’s more, wherever you go you need to protect the environment. Only in this way can we win respect for ourselves and our country.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语do harm to 对。。有害；so as to为了；aim to do 目的是；What’s more而且；So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind your behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；Only in this way can we win respect for ourselves and our country这个句子运用到only+状语+部分倒装 ；