假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Ladies and gentlemen，
It's my honor to give a speech here．After-class activities play a important part in our school life．Proper activities help enrich our lives，broaden our horizons or develop our personalities．
Mine own experience can serve as a case in point．When I was in Senior one，I become a member of our drama club，that I used to visit on weekends．Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club，I achieved a lot．
These activities bring me a lot of funs，provide me with good opportunities to develop new friend-ships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook．With so much advantages shown above，why not to join us at once？

分析课后活动在我们的校园生活中起着重要的作用．合适的活动不仅可以丰富我们的生活而且发展我们的人格，发展友谊，愿大家加入到课后活动中．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
It's my honor to give a speech here．After-class activities play a important
part in our school life．Proper activities help enrich our lives，broaden our
horizons or develop our personalities．Mine own experience can serve as a case
in point．When I was in Senior one，I become a member of our drama club，
that I used to visit on weekends．Since my participation in various activities
organizing by the club，I∧achieved a lot．These activities bring me a lot of funs，
provide me with good opportunities to develop new friend-ships and open a window
through which I have a brand-new outlook．With so much advantages shown above，
why not to join us at once？
详解：
1．a改成an；考查冠词．important的首字母发音是元音，前面冠词需要用an，故改为an．
2．or改成and；考查连词．陈述句中的和用and表示，故改为and．
3．Mine改成My；考查形容词性物主代词．这里应该是形容词性的物主代词我自己的经历，故改为My．
4．become改成became；考查时态．本文为一般过去时，本句的时间状语的动词为was，所以主句的谓语动词应改为过去时became．
5．that改成which；考查非限制性定语从句．，先行词是club，在从句中做visit的宾语，引导非限制性定语从句的关系代词用which．
6．organizing改成organized；考查非谓语，ctivities和organize之间构成被动关系，故用过去分词organized在句中做定语．
7．加have．考查时态，根据句意可以看出我已经获得了很多，应该用完成时而不是过去时，所以加have．
8．funs 改成fun．考查名词，给我们带来了很多的快乐，fun是不可数名词所以不能加s，故把funs改成fun．
9．much改成many．考查形容词，advantages是可数名词，应该用many修饰，much修饰不可数名词．
10．去掉to．考查固定句型，why not do sth是英语的固定句型"为什么不做某事呢？"所以去掉to．