Question

你班将举行以My dreamed career为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据提示写一篇演讲稿：

1. What’s your desired career?(e.g. lawyer, astronaut, writer… )

2. Why do you choose this career?

3. What preparations will you make to realize your dream?

注意  1词数120左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数。

2书写清楚,卷面整洁。

3行文连贯，符合英语表达习惯。

 

Good afternoon, boys and girls,

I feel honored to deliver a speech here sharing my dreamed future with you. I hope to be…

 

That’s all. Thank you for your attention.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good afternoon, boys and girls:

   I feel honored to deliver a speech here sharing my dream with you. I hope to be a teacher in the future. The main reason is that I get a lot of positive energy from my English teacher, who promotes lifelong learning attitude. As a teacher I’ll be motivated to keep updating what I have learned through lifelong learning so  as to keep pace with young students ,because they are always energetic and have new ideas. Besides , education plays an increasing important role in the development of society . Therefore, more qualified teachers are in great demand. What’s more, I’m out-going and enjoy communicating with others, which is definitely helpful in the teaching career.

    To reach my dream ,I will work hard to enter a good normal university to equip myself with relevant knowledge such as psychology, education theory and teaching skills. I believe I will make a good teacher through efforts.

  That’s all. Thank you for you attention

【解析】本文是演讲稿，已经给了提示，切记不可按条回答，十分生硬没有条理。题目是我的梦想，所以文章应该以第一人称描述，而时态也应以一般现在时为主。注意句子之间的衔接，多运用连词，使文章句法流畅，逻辑关系严谨。

【亮点说明】文中用 很多固定短语，如play a role in , in demand , what’s more,such  as , equip with, 并且很好的运用时态。句子衔接不仅仅运用连词，如therefore, besides, 还用the reason  is that, 这种高级句型结构。还运用非限制性定语从句，不定式做目的状语，使文章增色不少，还运用大量的高级词汇，如 updating,out-going, definitely ,effort.,给人眼前一亮的感觉。注意这些词汇的正确使用。

考点： 提纲类作文