题目内容
假设你是校报英文版的编辑李华。上周,你校心理俱乐部进行了一场活动,调查同学们遇到不开心的事情时一般向谁倾诉。请你用英语写一篇短文把这次调查情况刊登在你所负责的栏目中。调查结果如下表:
倾诉对象 | 比例 | 理由 |
朋友、同学 | 55% | 同龄人容易沟通 |
网友、笔友 | 15% | 现实生活里没见过,有安全感 |
老师、父母 | 25% | 有经验,能提供好的建议 |
无 | 5% | 不想告诉任何人 |
Last week, the psychological intervention club in our school carried out a survey about ______________________________________________________________________.
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Last week, the psychological intervention club in our school carried out a survey about whom the students would most like to talk to when they are feeling unhappy. Here are the results.
55% of the students surveyed named their friends or classmates, who, being of the same age, are likely to think the same way about something. Another 15% would talk to their e-pals or pen-pals. They thought that talking to those friends would give them a sense of security, since probably they would never meet each other in reality. Still another 25% would choose their teachers or parents, because of their rich experience or practical suggestions, which would help them solve their problems. Only 5% of them would close their hearts, for they said they seldom communicate with others, and have few friends.
(120 words)
解析试题分析:本题是一篇给材料作文,材料是考生熟悉的东西,考生不难理解写作的目的和要求,文章的开头已给出。考生重点应认真审题,审题包括几个方面:1.文章的时态2.内容要点。尤其内容要点的把握准确到位。3.考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构,尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。
4.考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。
考点:这是一篇记叙文
点评:动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作练习之外,还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
假设你是校报英文版的编辑李华。上周,你校心理俱乐部进行了一场活动,调查同学们遇到不开心的事情时一般向谁倾诉。请你用英语写一篇短文把这次调查情况刊登在你所负责的栏目中。调查结果如下表:
倾诉对象 |
比例 |
理由 |
朋友、同学 |
55% |
同龄人容易沟通 |
网友、笔友 |
15% |
现实生活里没见过,有安全感 |
老师、父母 |
25% |
有经验,能提供好的建议 |
无 |
5% |
不想告诉任何人 |
注意:1. 词数120左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头已写好。
Last week, the psychological intervention club in our school carried out a survey about ______________________________________________________________________.