题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你和你班的交流生Tom约好晚上一起去看电影。但你的叔叔突然打电话说他出差路过你们城市,让你去车站接他。请你给Tom发一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 重新约定。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I am very sorry to tell you that I can’t go to the cinema with you tonight. My uncle telephoned me just now. He told me he was passing our city on a business trip and wanted to pay a visit to us, so I have to meet him at the railway station. I wonder if we can see the film tomorrow. If you are free then we will meet together at 7:00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema. If this change is not convenient to you, it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】这是一封电子邮件,写作时,首先要写清要点,包括:表达歉意,解释原因,重新约定时间,在解释原因的时候,要有一定的逻辑,并且再次表示歉意。其次,要注意使用第一人称,最后还要注意时态,以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主。
【范文亮点】:
本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,语言风格符合书信的文体要求,是一篇较好的范文。“I am very sorry to tell you that I can’t go to the cinema with you tonight.”本句使用了that引导的定语从句。“ If you are free then we will meet together at 7:00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema.”本句使用了对将来的虚拟语句。“it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.”本句中开头的it做形式主语,真正的主语是to inform me of it ,还使用了短语so that,使文章语言自然流畅,内容过渡自然,增加了文章的可读性,使文章的表达更具有逻辑性,更富有条理。