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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning, I was having a walk in the park near my home while I came across some people making a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building. He were right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with her, but also he signed his name on my shirt!

Answer 1

【答案】①while→when；②actor→actors；③but→and/so；④Unfortunate→Unfortunately；⑤everywhere→anywhere；⑥out后加of；⑦were→was；⑧front前面的the去掉；⑨had→have；⑩her→him
【解析】本文叙述了作者在公园里散步时偶然遇到在这里拍电影的剧组，正好有自己最喜欢的演员，作者想和他合影，于是就回家拿来了相机。最后这位演员不仅给他合影，而且还给他在衬衫上签了名字。
①while→when 此处并不表示动作的持续性，故将while改为when。
②actor→actors 考查名词。one of +名词的复数，故用actors。
③but→and/so 考查连词。句意：我那时没有随身带相机，所以我赶紧跑回家去拿。but表示转折；so表示前因后果，and表示并列。因为这里前后关系可以看成顺承也可看成因果，故用so或and。
④Unfortunate→Unfortunately 此处用副词作状语修饰整个句子，故Unfortunate改为Unfortunately。
⑤everywhere→anywhere 考查代词。everywhere表示每一个地方；anywhere用于否定句，表示任何地方。
⑥out后加of 考查固定短语。walk out of a building从楼里走出来。
⑦were→was 考查主谓一致。he是单数，故were改为was。
⑧front前面的the去掉 考查固定短语。in the front of在某物的前面（指内部）；in front of在某物的前面（指外部），这里表示在某人的前面，故去掉the。
⑨had→have 考查动词。not only ...but also放在句首时not only后的句子用倒装，因为前面已经有助动词did，故后面用动词原形have。
⑩her→him 考查代词。那个演员是男的，故her改为him。