题目内容

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

If you like to break things when you are unhappy, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School is the school for you. This term, Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School will build a "stress wall" to help students who feel unhappy because of schoolwork or for other reasons.

     Tao Dehua, a leader at the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.

     "These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students. When under stress, the body get ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous. Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress," Tao said.

     "Tests and homework make me Sad," said Lu Yan, a junior girl. “I can't wait to hit the wall. It will help me a lot with my problems." 

     Another girl student who wouldn't give her name said that the wall won't help. “Mainly because it can't talk," she said. "I need to talk to someone when I'm sad."

【写作内容】

 1、以约30个词概括这段短文内容;

 2、然后以约120个词就“Should the stress wall be built"这个主题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:

     (1) 学生的压力来源;

     (2) 是否该建此墙;

     (3) 提供一些其他有效的减压方法。

【写作要求】

  l、可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子;

  2、作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 

 

【答案】

 

1、The passage conveys to us that in order to help students with stress, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School built a “stress wall” for students to relax, towards which students have different opinions.

2、One possible version:

Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work. There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work and future is getting fiercer and fiercer, students feel more and more pressure.

As far as I am concerned, building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate. For one thing, as the saying goes, violence is not the solution to problems, which means that even if students punch the wall heavily, the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out. For another, this may lead students to solve a problem with violence, causing more trouble.           

People have different ways of relieving stress in order to live happy and healthy lives. Some people prefer to engage in physical exercise by taking part in outdoor activities or playing sports, while some feel more relaxed listening to music or even after a good sleep. As for me, I find that the best way to reduce stress is to spend time with my family or friends. In addiction, some interest clubs such as music, dance, are also good places that offer comfort to students.

【解析】本文是篇论说文,框架提示较详细,学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,根据提示写作分为三部分内容,第一段陈述学生压力的来源;第二段发表自己的看法,是否该建此“压力墙”,要有自己肯定的主意,不能模棱两可;第三段提供其他减压方法,附带叙述其用处。另外,要注意文章的时态,要用一般现在时。用第一人称和第三人称有单数也要用复数。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章要点齐全,表达思路明确,每一段的段首句使用准确到位,将三段内容一目了然呈现出来。文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,知识点运用恰当到位,比如under great pressure,as well as,let out,the best way to,such as等, 还运用了定语从句which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work;which the students can hit, is not appropriate;which means that even if students punch the wall heavily等及句型There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work非谓语动词causing more trouble等。并注意了句子的衔接如:nowadays,as far as I am concerned,For one thing……For another,In addiction等。

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