Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1)、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2)、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
This morning, I was jogging in the park while I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clear, someone had left it there in accident. I picked up and checked the contents. Inside it, I found some money or a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately try the number. A man answered it in an anxious voice. Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would come right away. Ten minutes late, the man arrived. After confirm he was the owner, I returned the wallet back to him. With his thumb up, he expressed his thank to me repeatedly. Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.

Answer 1

【答案】①while→when ； ②Clear→Clearly； ③in→by； ④picked后面加上it ； ⑤or→and ； ⑥try→tried ； ⑦late→later ； ⑧confirm→confirming ； ⑨去掉back ； ⑩thank---thanks

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了在公园拾到一个钱包，并归还失主的经历。
①考查连词。句意：今天早上我在公园里慢跑，这时候我看见长凳上有一个钱包。was/were doing sth...when...，固定句型，“正在做某事，这时候......”。故把while改为when。

②考查副词。句意：很清楚，有人意外把它忘在那里了。副词修饰整个句子，故把Clear改为Clearly。
③考查固定短语。by accident固定短语，“故意”。故把in改为by。

④考查代词。句意：我把它捡起，核对了里面的东西。可知在picked 后面加上it。

⑤考查连词。句意：在里面我发现了一些钱和一张带有电话号码的卡。故把or改为and。

⑥考查时态。句意：认为主人将会担忧，我立刻试着拨了号码。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把try改为tried。

⑦考查副词。句意：十分钟之后这位男士到了。故把late改为later。

⑧考查动名词。句意：确认他是主人之后我把钱包还给了他。after doing sth."做某事之后"，故把confirm改为confirming。

⑨考查动词。return“归还”，它本身含有back的意思，故去掉back。

⑩考查名词。句意：他竖起大拇指反复地向我表达感谢。express one's thanks“表达某人的感谢”，用名词形式，故把thank改为thanks。